[ooc -- CRITIQUE POST]

If you've got anything you want to say about this character -- the good, the bad, the ugly, whatever -- don't hesitate to leave a comment.

As always, anonymous commenting is enabled, IP logging is turned off. Seriously, don't be afraid to rip me a new one; I'm not going to improve on anything if I don't get torn into!

If not, you can always watch Speed Racer Oh maaaan does that take me back.